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Category: Mini-saga

Asking For It

Sswitcher 

CATEGORY: Mini-Saga

50 words

<pre>
I          think      this       fifty      word
format     is         rather     stupid.    You            10      
really     can't      say        anything   worthwhile
in         a          mere       fifty      words.         20 
You        would      have       to         be
pretty     silly      to         even       try.           30
In         fact,      I'd        go         so
far        as         to         say        that           40
anyone     foolish    enough     to         attempt
it         should     be         severely   spanked.       50
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Hal

I think that the writer of this story did a very good job. They packed a lot of fun into just fifty words. I know that I don't have the ability to create this story like they did. I wonder if they could write a complete novel if they had one hundred words. I look forward to reading more of their efforts. Good work!

SirHal

Tami

Well I guess you answered your own question. I think a lot of good ideas came out of the mini saga, sometimes it's just enough words to get you interested enough to come back for more. And sometimes it's not.

Tami

Sarah Nada

Asking for it, indeed. What this story lacks as a work of fiction, it more than makes up as a work of brattiness. I'm a bottom, but after a scant 50 words I felt more than ready to spank the author. :)

Sarah