Category: First/last
Upset
UPSET (FIRST/LAST) (F/M) "Look Dave, I can see you're really upset by this". "Upset!" Dave exclaimed. "I'm a slave!" "I didn't steal your necklace!" "I can't believe you did this to me!" "Temper, temper Dave", Cindy mocked. "It's not polite to raise your voice to your new owner". "Owner?" Dave gasped. "That's right, muscle head" Cindy chortled. "Daddy said I can buy you at the auction!" Sally nudged her girlfriend and giggled. "If we're going to bid on him, we should really see him" she tittered. "You heard him, stud" Cindy said with a wicked, vengeful smile. "Drop the shorts". "For the love of..." Dave's plea was cut short by a sharp SWISH! as a riding crop scalded a stroked across his muscular rump. "You heard the ladies!" the slave trader barked. Dave blushed crimson but dutifully pulled down his shorts as Cindy and Sally laughed and whistled. "My oh my!" Sally giggled as Dave's equipment came into view. "Can we see him...perform?" she chuckled. Dave felt sick as the slave trader squirted some lotion onto Dave's palm. "Go ahead, slave", Cindy goaded. "Jerk off for us, you ugly monkey". "Please, Cindy!" Dave begged. "This is so humiliating!" "Humiliating?" Cindy shot back angrily. "As humiliating as finding out your boyfriend is cheating?" "You don't know the first thing about humiliation". Cindy smiled and looked down at Dave's member. "But I'm going to teach you!" Cindy nodded to auctioneer, who tapped Dave's bottom menacingly with the crop. Cindy smiled triumphantly as her former boyfriend began to stroke his long shaft. "Don't worry, Dave", Cindy teased. "I'll keep your little willie locked up, but you'll still get plenty of sex". "I have lots of gay friends". Dave gasped in horror. A firm tap across his bottom persuaded him to resume his duties. "My gay friends will love that tight little butt of yours" Cindy taunted. "And I can't wait to see the look on your face when YOU find out what sperm tastes like!" "But you'll still get a chance to have sex with women" Cindy added, her voice dripping with sarcasm. "You'll make an excellent little pussy licker". "I don't do that!" Dave gasped as he furiously beat his meat. "Silence, slave!" the slave trader said, punctuating his command with a sharp stroke of the crop. "You're going to have a lot of new experiences, stud", Cindy replied. "Get used to that whip". "You're going to feel it a lot when you pull my friends around in our pony carriage on my Daddy's ranch!" "I'm going now, Dave" Cindy said. "I have a front row seat at that auction". "But I did have one other thing to tell you". Cindy leaned in close and whispered in his ear. "It turns out I found my necklace behind my dresser". "I hope you're not too upset, Dave".
Haley Brimley email
A lovely tale of revenge, nicely thought-out and well woven. The final "coup de theatre", however enjoyable, isn't even necessary to make it the humorous, twisted story it already is. Both Cindy and Sally's delight and Dave's horror are well portrayed, even though the best touch is in the choice of the first line: upon reading it, one is automatically brought to think of "Dave" being an authority figure... or at least, I did... and this was one great way to turn the tables. Well done.
Haley
Haron email
Hmm, all these kinds of torture sound exactly like what some people of my acquaintance would want. If this scheme ever materialises, we might find people stealing on purpose...
Ivy Tran email
I thought this was a little weird, actually, really weird! It was very disturbing in the end, I couldn't even read it more than once. I guess the whole topic of slavery is just that disturbing to me. Otherwise, I guess it was a decent story. Decent job!